WOAH! Just... Woah. The make up is perfect. I especialy (excuse my spelling) love the eyes; are those glasses or make up or what? The cigerette is a great touch, and I love how the clothes are classy but laid back.
If I had to say something negative, I would like to see more detail on the hand. When I look at the face and neck, I just wish the hand showed some more of your amazing talent with make up. Also, there are some details - like the background and earring - that I don't think fit very well. But that's just me nitt-picking. ^_^